The panning of the athletic grounds is super great!! The music bg is too loud in my opinion and the audio of the man should be down a few decibels. Like all the b-roll you have and how bright and lively the video is.
Your pans are good, you can tell you used a tripod for most of them. A lav mic would have helped a lot with the echo in the interview. You could also possibly pull down the master audio so that it doesn't peak too high. I feel like your music could be a little bit quieter so it doesn't draw away from the interview or you could fade it out/down during the interview parts.
The audio of the interview was really well done. The shots you had were great as well. The music in the background was upbeat and the questions that were asked gave us a good insight to how that all works. Great job!
I think this was very informative about how the athletic grounds department works. It's something I would have never known anything about. I think you had some great shots. The pans were done very smoothly and it was great. I wish you would have interviewed your subject in a different location. The light from behind his head was distracting and it looked like he was out of focus. Overall, great job!
Really good turnout on your project! You made field care look pretty interesting, I liked the pans and the b-roll you got, I think you cut between the actual interview footage and b-roll just the right amount.
I think you guys picked a perfect day to shoot the B-Roll, as the lighting really creates a peasant feeling. The bit of music added is also nice for when you are only showing B-Roll. I'm glad you had an introduction, and that you didn't just jump right in to the gentleman talking. For being about general landscaping, you guys were actually able keep me interested, so very nice work!
I thought the music really tied everything together and made it feel very professional. Some of the panning and tilting could have been smoother. But I imagine that was an equipment limitation and that you were aware of it. Overall, the documentary is great.
I loved the beginning panning, and music choice. One thing I would've done is bump up the color and saturation a little in order to make the grass look even healthier than it already is! Additionally your exposure looked a little high for some of the shots outside but other than that, great video!
It was very interesting and informative. The only thing that needs some work is the audio, I believe it was peaking, and the music was good, but a little loud. Great Video.
The panning of the athletic grounds is super great!! The music bg is too loud in my opinion and the audio of the man should be down a few decibels. Like all the b-roll you have and how bright and lively the video is.
ReplyDeleteYour pans are good, you can tell you used a tripod for most of them. A lav mic would have helped a lot with the echo in the interview. You could also possibly pull down the master audio so that it doesn't peak too high. I feel like your music could be a little bit quieter so it doesn't draw away from the interview or you could fade it out/down during the interview parts.
ReplyDeleteYou really picked the best day to film, the natural light really brought the project out
ReplyDeleteVery nice pans. The interview clips were a bit fuzzy. Love the music in the background.
ReplyDeleteThe audio of the interview was really well done. The shots you had were great as well. The music in the background was upbeat and the questions that were asked gave us a good insight to how that all works. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI think this was very informative about how the athletic grounds department works. It's something I would have never known anything about. I think you had some great shots. The pans were done very smoothly and it was great. I wish you would have interviewed your subject in a different location. The light from behind his head was distracting and it looked like he was out of focus. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteReally good turnout on your project! You made field care look pretty interesting, I liked the pans and the b-roll you got, I think you cut between the actual interview footage and b-roll just the right amount.
ReplyDeleteI think you guys picked a perfect day to shoot the B-Roll, as the lighting really creates a peasant feeling. The bit of music added is also nice for when you are only showing B-Roll. I'm glad you had an introduction, and that you didn't just jump right in to the gentleman talking. For being about general landscaping, you guys were actually able keep me interested, so very nice work!
ReplyDeleteI thought the music really tied everything together and made it feel very professional. Some of the panning and tilting could have been smoother. But I imagine that was an equipment limitation and that you were aware of it. Overall, the documentary is great.
ReplyDeleteI loved the beginning panning, and music choice. One thing I would've done is bump up the color and saturation a little in order to make the grass look even healthier than it already is! Additionally your exposure looked a little high for some of the shots outside but other than that, great video!
ReplyDeleteIt was very interesting and informative. The only thing that needs some work is the audio, I believe it was peaking, and the music was good, but a little loud. Great Video.
ReplyDeleteSome of the pans felt a little long. I would of liked to see another action shot.
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